Wednesday, 13 September 2017

speech self reflection

Self Reflection!

WALT: Plan, prepare and deliver a persuasive speech related to our T3 inquiry topic - Healthy Bodies, Strong Minds
Topic: why pollutants have an impact on our lives
Persuasive component: work on your conclusion
Time: 2:37


Keep
(What would you keep in your speech if you did it again?)
Change

(What would you change in your speech for next time, how could you make it even better? and why?)
Match
(Pick a partner from our class and ask what they would keep, change, add and chuck. What is similar to your thinking?)
Most of my speech including my start but not my end







My conclusion because as told by the teacher my conclusion was a little fast and didn't really disengage the audience.
Ollie:
Keep:
mostly the whole speech i reckon it was pretty good

Change:
Nothing really?

Add:
Don’t know?

Chuck:
Don’t know?

(ollie doesn't know?)

Nothing matched between ollie and i because i would like to add to help me get into the finals but ollie thinks his speech was fine just the way it was…..
Add
(What further ideas and/or detail would you add to your speech? Were you persuasive enough - what do you peers think?)
Chuck
(What are some of the parts of your speech you would scrap?)
I would add more to my conclusion, as i previously said it did not disengage the audience.






Nothing really i would only just add to my speech to make it better.






Reflective thoughts above + feedback from your learning buddy/peers/teacher
= your next LEARNING step...

My next learning step for my next speech in the future is …….

because...



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